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departure from san juan

departure from san juan

a poem about moving away from puerto rico to michigan

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𝐄𝐝𝐠𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐏𝐨𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐚
Mar 15, 2024
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a large building with a red dome on top of it
Photo by Stephanie Klepacki on Unsplash
In the hush of a dew-kissed dawn,
where the ocean whispers to timid sands,
I watched my world shrink through oval glass—
San Juan, a tapestry of lights, fading softly
as if the stars themselves were dimming.

The plane, a silver bird too eager in its flight,
climbed higher, and my heart clung
to the green arms of E…

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